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| Old House |
Weh Island is not only popular by underwater story. If we are travel around the town, Kota Atas, Kota Bawah Barat, and Kota Bawah Timur, we can joying the vintage atmosphere.
One morning, I do breakfast at a traditional coffee shop, in Jalan Perdagangan street. At the time, last Friday of May, I saw five of classic car. They were parked on sideway. How a beautiful them. :D
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| Old Car. |
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| Five of Classic |
Then, when I do across the Kota Bawah Timur, a house was interested me. I stop my motorcycle. I get in the house area. I met an unmate. He does permit me to take picture.
As the fact, that classic house is the house of nobleman or
ulee balang (Acehnese), Teuku Abbas. A districk chief of Sabang, during 1904-1944. And the house was built in 1910.
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| House of Ulee Balang |
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| Inscription |
Oke. Time to go to Weh Island again. The near future, you can joying Sabang Fair Festival, during 18-24 June, 2014. Have joy it.[]
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It's look liked Australia, no. no. London .. hmm. (the view of classic car)
(kidding hehe)
Haha, your comment is same with Facebook post, hehe. But, thankfully have visited this blog. :D
Go ahead mas bro!
I think, day by day u cross the lines, u can arrive at ur point at the first post u wrote.
In case u miss my input that I shared u recently, here are some critisize from me (as long as u want to hear my advice, LOL :D)
- not only.... add "But also". in first paragraph.
-we are travel... are +ing= travelling
-can joying..... fix with " can have a joy" or just "enjoy"
-I do breakfast,.,.... replace with "I have breakfast"...
-how a beautiful... replace with "how beautiful they are'
-I saw five of classic car... means"saya melihat lima dari mobil klasik, not saya melihat lima mobil klasik. so, u should omit "of".
- I do across.... means "saya sangat keseberang". it should be I cross. or come across the...means saya datang menyeberang...
-He does permit.... "does" is not necessary here. because permit is verb. just write "he permits me....."
I seldom hear or read "as the fact"... usually, it written as "as the matter of fact, or in fact".
Anyway, keep doing n keep writing bro!
Coz, there is no improvement if u dont do.
Cheer up, bro!
I'm at ur back :D
Ha-ha..
Thank you thank you mas Bro for your advise. (Even, many advise) .
I feel this comment as such as I anttended the lesson of english class in hight school. :D Hehe.
I hope you to teach me for next time. Thank you.
great!
there are a lot mistakes, but i got the point of your story. Thats important! :)
Keep writing, and step by step learn to correct the mistake :)
additional correction from previous comment :
permits bla bla : he let me bla bla..
a house was interested me : i was interested ...
how a beautiful them : how beautiful they are
keep writing! :)
Thanks a lot Kak Mira for your correction. My pleasure.
I have to. :D
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