In Banda Aceh, I took Lamnyong River banks as my favourite jogging track. Why? Because I could have enjoying many things. Furthermore, look at the pictures below.
1. Who is this?
This is my friend. His name is Fahrijal. He is 25 years old. There are many things behind his shadow. There is the top of Seulawah Agam Mountain on his right. In front of him, there is the skylight before sunrise. There is a river (Krueng Lamnyong). The river is under the horizon. The horizon is under the skylight.
2. Where is this?
There is a young boy. He's sits down on the seat under the tree. There is some shadows of the tree. The shadows is on the canal water. The canal is under the bridge that connecting the coffeeshop and my jogging track.
3. Are there two birds?
Yes, there are two birds. They are over the horizon. There is some orange skylight. The orange skylight is under the birds. Is there someone who jogging? No, there is not someone who jogging. Is there a mountain? Yes, there is a mountain. Is there the mountain over two birds? No, the mountain is not under two birds. By the way, what is the mountain name? It is Seulawah Agam Mountain.
4. Wagon in The Wall
Do you find a horse in the photo above? Yes, you are right. By the way, are you sure that is the horse? I'm sorry that I have to say 'no'. There is not a horse, but there is a painting. There are many things inside the painting. There is a wagon. The wagon is on the middle. There are three coffee tables and three trees. They are in front and behind of wagon.
5. Children
Are there five childs? No, there are not five childs. But there are two childs. Are there driving? No, they are not driving. But they are cycling on the riverbanks. Are the children under the sunrise? No, the children are not under the sunrise. Where is the sunrise? The sunrise is in front of a child.
6. Car Wheels
What do you see? Yes, you are right if you say 'car wheels'. There are three couples of car wheel. Are they over the tree? No, they are not over the tree. But they are in front of the tree. Is the tree red? No, the tree is not red. But the tree is green. Is there a car? No, there is not a car. Are there two cows? Yes, there are two cows. Where are the cows? They are behind of the tree.
7. Weird Cloud
Is there some light of sunrise? Yes, there is some light of sunrise. The sunrise is over the horizon. Is there some clouds? Yes, there are some clouds. The clouds is beside the sunrise. How are the shape of the cloud? The cloud is weird.
That's all. Please comment if you find something is wrong. Thank you. :D
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3 couples --> lbh enakan disebut 3 pairs kali ya
IMHO , penggunaan there is not agak2 gak enak didengar, tp g yakin bnr gak nya . Coba cek link ini :
http://www.bbc.co.uk/.../grammar/learnit/learnitv354.shtml
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/.../britisch.../no-or-not
Hi Ms. Mee. Thanks for your attention.
I agree with you to use "pairs" for "3 couples". That's more suitable. :D
Bagus, Makmur. Cara menulis dan belajar bahasa menjadi menyenangkan. :)
Thank you Isni. I hope so. :D
Hi Makmur, sorry for the late review. Here you go ;)
1. "In Banda Aceh, I took Lamnyong River banks as my favourite jogging track. Why? Because I could have enjoying many things"-> this happen in the past or still happen until now?
if in the past: you were being right to use past sentence
if still happening: use verb 1
2. "Is there someone who jogging? No, there is not someone who jogging. Is there a mountain? Yes, there is a mountain. Is there the mountain over two birds? No, the mountain is not under two birds." -> you can simplify the sentences by, for example: is there anyone going to the school today? no there's not.
3. "There is not a horse, but there is a painting." -> 'there' is used to describe the place. Horse isn't a place right?
4. child -> one person. Children -> more than 1 child
5. "There are three couples of car wheel" -> pairs is better
You've done great, Makmur! ;)
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